This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Layla, I'm Isabel and I go to St Bernadette's School, I'm a Year six there. I like the way you explained about stick insects with writing questions at the start and explaining them through out the story. Next time could you get the right size so all your writing fits on the page. keep up the good work.
Hi Isabel! Thank you for the feedback. I am a year 5. I was trying to get it to fit on the page properly but it would only work if I made the text smaller. If I made the text smaller then you won´t be able to read it. Thanks again! - Layla
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Hello Layla, I'm Isabel and I go to St Bernadette's School, I'm a Year six there. I like the way you explained about stick insects with writing questions at the start and explaining them through out the story. Next time could you get the right size so all your writing fits on the page.
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work.
Hi Isabel! Thank you for the feedback. I am a year 5. I was trying to get it to fit on the page properly but it would only work if I made the text smaller. If I made the text smaller then you won´t be able to read it. Thanks again! - Layla
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