DANGER!
One early morning I woke up to be looking at an unusual room. I got out of bed and there were two other people in the room. I asked them what their names were and one of them said “Max”. I was waiting for the others to answer but before I could ask them again they were gone. The only person remaining was Max. Max asked me what my name was so I said “Layla”. I asked Max where we were but all he said was “Open the door and find out” So I did. I then realized we were in a wonderland of horrors.
We didn’t really look at the ground so we didn’t know that there was already an escape tunnel. We stayed in the dungeon for 3 nights without seeing the escape tunnel but eventually we then saw the tunnel and escaped. I was still so hungry and I wanted McDonald’s 10 times worse. When I got out of the tunnel I realized that I was imagining the whole thing in my bedroom and the dungeon was just the bathroom.
I was so relieved! Luckily it was time for dinner and my mum had a surprise! It was McDonald's. I had a lovely dinner and I lived happily ever after.
The End!! By Layla
We are learning to write a Narrative about finding the perfect hiding place.-Layla
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