This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
WALT: To create a DLO of the science experiment we learnt.
We have been learning about WEATHER for literacy and Mrs Jack has had an idea to do a science experiment with us. The DLO that I have made will tell you everything else.
Hi Layla I really like how you made that on google drawing, It looks amazing. Mabey next time you could make the size of your drawing a bit smaller From Connie SHS
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hello Layla,
ReplyDeleteI love your DLO! You added a lot of information, and I love the pictures you added in. What was your favourite part of the experiment?
Keep up the good work!
Prudence,
Yaldhurst Model School
Hello Prudence!
DeleteMy favorite part of the experiment was when we put the bottle in the hot water and the balloon blew up.
Thank you for the comment!
Layla
SHS
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ReplyDeleteHi Layla
ReplyDeleteI really like how you made that on google drawing, It looks amazing. Mabey next time you could make the size of your drawing a bit smaller
From Connie SHS
Thanks Connie!
DeleteI will definitely do that next time!
Layla
SHS
Hi Layla.
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog post.
I think is quite cool.
Did you find it interesting ?
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
Hi Ian!
DeleteYes I found it interesting even though I already knew how it worked!
Kind Regards
Layla
SHS