In literacy for writing we have been learning how to write persuasive writing and persuade someone.
To persuade someone it is like convincing somebody to do or believe something. It was hard to persuade somebody at first but then we learnt more about it and it became easy. Hopefully my writing will persuade my best friend Maia.
Dear Maia
You really need to stop shouting every now and then. Don’t you know that shouting is not going to get you anything or anywhere?
This is why you shouldn’t. First because a lot of people don’t think it is necessary. They probably don’t think it’s necessary because it’s not important to shout all the time.
Then you might get told off by the teachers for shouting in class and we don’t want that to happen do we? Nobody wants to get in trouble.
You sometimes give me and others headaches. Sometimes even the teachers get really bad headaches from all your short and loud shouting.
Lastly is because it gets really, seriously, super duper annoying.
You could also lose your voice and you won’t be able to sing in choir. That would be pretty bad wouldn’t it?
So please stop shouting a lot especially when you get excited. Just remember next time, don’t shout.
By Layla
Hi Layla. i'm very sorry for shouting in your ears all the time. I wont do it again I promise BFF
ReplyDeleteHi Layla,
ReplyDeleteI like this post because you explained what you were doing, and your piece of writing is very clear.
I also liked how you listed out why Maia shouldn't shout, and that's an important part of persuasive writing.
What is your favourite type of writing? Mine is probably Persuasive writing or Poetry.
Thanks,
Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.